Thursday, September 10, 2009

Seaturtle

I'm writing this story for my friend Matt Weaver. I didn't know what to write about so he made up this story. One day there was a young mommy sea turtle that went up onto the beach because she needed to lay her eggs. After a long few hours she finally finished digging her nest and laying all her eggs. She then crawled back into the ocean never to see her kids again. A few weeks later, on a cold dark evening, the eggs all hatched at once, almost in sinc with each other. But little did they know, every single predator was waiting patiently outside there nest to eat them all. A herd of turtle swarmed the beach and in a frenzy of death all the turtles scattered to the cool water. But there was one turtle that defied all the odds...he had SUPER POWERS! He flew up and zapped all the killer birds out of the sky with his heat vision. After all settled down, one turtle remained in the waves....all his siblings had been caught. So he ducked back into the water and swam off into open ocean to repeat the entire cycle all over again.

2 comments:

  1. Awesome story it has well developed plot. Turtles are cool but turtles that can fly and zap things with heat vision are even better. Your friend did great job on the story he should do a sequel to it. Like when the boats attack or something. Well good luck with it.

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  2. Dude this is the best story ever. Turtles with powers are the best. I have never seen a turtle shoot down a bird with its laser vision that must be a crazy sight to see. At least that turtle will have no predators and it can ensure the safety of the other turtles and make sure nothing happens to them. Rather creative story and I can't wait until the next series of the story.

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